tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post2416290509255462501..comments2023-10-12T09:02:26.023-07:00Comments on LiteMag: A Short Story: A TIMOROUS TIME IN OCTOBERLiteMaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13174839935438820859noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-27015643828770391142021-12-26T23:23:33.460-08:002021-12-26T23:23:33.460-08:00Thanks King!Thanks King!The Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-81228509783299624872021-12-26T23:23:01.825-08:002021-12-26T23:23:01.825-08:00Thank you very muchThank you very muchThe Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-61815072074672294332021-04-15T11:15:50.517-07:002021-04-15T11:15:50.517-07:00Thank you Mr NgalindaThank you Mr NgalindaThe Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-60075633158627851152021-04-01T04:20:21.177-07:002021-04-01T04:20:21.177-07:00Nice storyNice storyngalindanewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09688601450395008009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-78356606476233653372021-04-01T02:05:58.702-07:002021-04-01T02:05:58.702-07:00Thank you very much!Thank you very much!The Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-35727081488232934412021-04-01T02:05:28.497-07:002021-04-01T02:05:28.497-07:00Thank you very much!Thank you very much!The Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-66283451938250004132021-03-30T18:55:49.541-07:002021-03-30T18:55:49.541-07:00It is a use of extreme hyperbole to show how short...It is a use of extreme hyperbole to show how short she isThe Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-43753396679409198762021-03-30T18:54:48.757-07:002021-03-30T18:54:48.757-07:00Thank you!Thank you!The Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-6025015438298014142021-03-30T18:44:12.988-07:002021-03-30T18:44:12.988-07:00Omgussh! Short stories end in some sort of suspens...Omgussh! Short stories end in some sort of suspense I guessThe Kings' Lounge - A Social Entrepreneurial Viewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593990061061121826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-35758163436983148672017-09-09T06:49:25.425-07:002017-09-09T06:49:25.425-07:00Nice story and very intruiging. I was really curio...Nice story and very intruiging. I was really curious to know if the mirror juju was real. (Lol)Mimiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02554328908567096221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-38850063887992782312017-09-09T06:49:16.353-07:002017-09-09T06:49:16.353-07:00Nice story and very intruiging. I was really curio...Nice story and very intruiging. I was really curious to know if the mirror juju was real. (Lol)Mimiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02554328908567096221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-60601569837941461322016-11-16T10:49:59.357-08:002016-11-16T10:49:59.357-08:00Wonderful piece Wonderful piece King Makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11908654110629338968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-85073653870712293342016-11-08T04:40:06.924-08:002016-11-08T04:40:06.924-08:00I was impressed with the simplicity at which u unf...I was impressed with the simplicity at which u unfolded the events in such a serious and funny note,It made the whole story so interesting and captivating, I wud av loved it to be much more longer bcos as I was reading, I had forgotten it was even a short story, bcos of the way u arranged ur thoughts in Simplicity . as a grammarian, am expected to critic. It's a good piece, but I was more particular with the complex way at which u exposed ur characters to our consciousness, at a point, I had to go back and check who diz person is again, But as a stylistician, I could see it as a technique which u employed intentionally, Considering the atmosphere of events in the story as captured by you, there is a complexity in the exposition of ur characters and it cud be as a result of u trying to capture the complex nature of Nigeria, the University community to be precise at that particular time as being complex. But in all, it's a nice and. Keep it up, expect more from u! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18387427015695680561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-47352073618355563322016-11-07T14:10:25.296-08:002016-11-07T14:10:25.296-08:00Nice, really nice. In the part where u were descri...Nice, really nice. In the part where u were describing yoyinsola, the 5inch tall, was that for her hair or u meant 5foot tall for her height? Pls check and correct it. Other than dat, it's wonderful.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047317430408844661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-19012279883828188122016-11-07T13:03:46.340-08:002016-11-07T13:03:46.340-08:00void of unnecessary ambiguity and vagueness, high...void of unnecessary ambiguity and vagueness, highly intriguing an interesting. well done babe.!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03545853672498401225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810522640827629727.post-7021888965512735852016-11-07T12:44:51.601-08:002016-11-07T12:44:51.601-08:00Wow This is one perfectly composed story the words...Wow This is one perfectly composed story the words used are properly and orderly arranged,its a short story that has a million expressions and explanation, we need more writers like this in Nigeria.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08651464020421528964noreply@blogger.com